I loved the story but i wished the lines of text were bigger and not so clummed. it would be perfect to put 3 lines max at once at the screen, not more.
I just put out minor update 1a based on your feedback, and it should be a little easier to see and read on mobile devices. Larger font sizes throughout the presentation, and the longer text lines have been broken up into multiple lines instead. Thanks again for the suggestions!
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the art is beautiful!.. too bad it's AI.
I loved the story but i wished the lines of text were bigger and not so clummed. it would be perfect to put 3 lines max at once at the screen, not more.
If I drew it myself, it would be stick figure art. Bad stick figures at that. Glad you enjoyed it though, and thanks for the feedback!
I just put out minor update 1a based on your feedback, and it should be a little easier to see and read on mobile devices. Larger font sizes throughout the presentation, and the longer text lines have been broken up into multiple lines instead. Thanks again for the suggestions!